pg 131 October 27th, 2006, 7:27 pm

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daidaishar, October 27th, 2006, 7:21 pm


umm, yeah, playing around with text some more. Trying variation for different speakers. I'll be doing this a bit, so please tel me what you think. Is Teddy's text too thin to read?

umm, yeah, Teddy backstory, with little Teddy, back before he died.
I'm thinking of doing a halloween vote incentive, any costume requests?

replies:


re Wowfreak2011: thanks, I was sort of dissapointed in it actualy. I think I've one better ones before.

re kreestuh: thanks for the vote of confidence

re rukiaprincess: Thanks again (all you guys are so supportive, yay!)

re teurastaa: more bonding time.

re Nyliak: I don't know, they seemed out of place.

re Theflowerchild: Maneads (sp? whatever). They're just buttons..gold-colored buttons.

re Jayge: I'm gonna have to blurb at the end of the chapter talking about gypsies.

re darklightartist: sorry, Teddy's a sulker, but he'll get a little better as time passes.

re Assuni: people are sort of depressing sometimes. There's gonna be more of this sort of thing later.

re Angelzora:thanks ^^

re Zed Di Dragon: I've been trying to keep Teddy's eyes constantly a bit creepy despite his patheticness.

re doom Bubbles: aww, now what sort of vampire character would he be if he didn't have eating issues?

re VampireKizu: a change of pace is nice, although I think I like wirting for Drake's explanations better, he's less morose.

re Mythee: Drakes 2000+ and Teddy's somewhere in his early twenties, older than Joan. I'm not gonna set specific ages because in the setting I'm using, people would probably be considered adults at a much younger age. A long childhood is sort of a luxury. Both Joan and Teddy are old enough to be considered adults. Actualy, both of them should probably have already been married at their age, but Joan's eye and all the superstitions about it mess things up for her, and was sort of a withdrawn fellos even before the trauma thing happened (his mum sort of raised him appart from the rest of a caravan).

I actualy can answer about Joan being human or not because it's not a plot point or anything. Biologiacaly, she's human, so if you difine it that way, yes, but Solifidians aren't defined by speceis, but by their connection to Bahamoot. Looking at it this way, she's neither Humor nor solifidan. Medians would be something between the two.

re DarkElf92; wow, you just went and commented on a bunch of pages, thanks.

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Jayge, October 27th, 2006, 7:38 pm


The mom is really, really pretty. And done well. I love it >.>


The new text, btw, is near impossible to read.

TheDemonDragonCat, October 27th, 2006, 7:49 pm


Little teddy is so cute ^-^ and i can read the text just fine for Teddy.

doom Bubbles, October 27th, 2006, 8:07 pm


yea i like the previous text better so far, and joan looks like she's suddenly got lazy eye in the second pannel..

but that aside, i love the last pannel. and i really like how your colouring the comic at the moment.

Theflowerchild, October 27th, 2006, 8:18 pm


Yeah! Maneads, but not sure if thats how you spell them either.
I don't really like that text, personally. It looks better in the big panel, but in thes first two, looks kind of awkward. And in the second panel, she looks kind of dead. Like her eyes are all rolled up and... *shudders*

FELTY, October 27th, 2006, 10:26 pm

my eyes...my eyes..!
sorry but ditto goes for me too.the text is too squished up in the beginnning and ummmm what happened to joan in 2nd?
but the last panel. tres bien. young teddy is drawn really good.he's so cute!!! i love this colouring. not too dark, not too light.
last ques. why is he touching his hand...what is on his hand...is it something of his mom's.

newby1mm, October 27th, 2006, 11:57 pm


I just want to say I love your comic! It would be a real treat for me to pick it up at any comic convention! :D

Also, I think it would be fun to have any of them dress as:

A mobster
A really cheesey ghost costume
The pope (heh..)
Dog the Bounty Hunter

My two cents.

Imola, October 28th, 2006, 12:37 am


De panels are lovely, but the text is giving an eye-ache. ^^()

Angelzora, October 28th, 2006, 8:12 am


Lovely page but I agree about the nearly impossible to read font! >_< You should keep the old font or use a more readable one like Anime Ace? Just a suggestion but meh. Teddy's mum is so pretty!

Sidheprincezzz, October 28th, 2006, 10:37 am


hmmm i can read teddy's text, though you might want to make is somewhat bigger. joan's text is really hard to read.
the last panel is amazing! i love how you layered teddy in the background and his mom and younger teddy look fantastic!
it sucks that she left her child. T^T

daidaishar, October 28th, 2006, 12:48 pm


mmkay, I've changed Joan's text and thickened up Teddy's. let me know if this helps.

Doodlebot, October 28th, 2006, 1:01 pm


The text looks fine to me *shrug*

And costume ideas? Hmm... My first thought would be the characters from the anime 'Hellsing' which involves vampires... Uhm.. it might be funny to see the characters swap clothes. Beau Beau taking on a humanoid form would just be kinda fun...

Oh, what about FF7 characters? Like Teddy as Vincent, Draco as Cloud, Beau Beau as Red XIII, and Joan as... uhm... Aries?

Theflowerchild, October 28th, 2006, 1:58 pm


Actually I really like that. With the curly letters for the gypsy scene. But that may just be me :)
I'm going to be a ninja for halloween but don't tell anyone!

Jayge, October 28th, 2006, 4:58 pm


Teddie's still hurts. Not the thickness but the tilt and the size don't work for me. I have enough strain on my eyes anyway. Maybe it's the fact that my vision sucks, but contacts negate that. Meh.


edit: joan's is perfect though.

BatsAreFlyingRats, October 28th, 2006, 6:57 pm


Hey di,
in the second panel the "the" is missing a T. I like it though. I am prefecting my skill of proof reading after getting a c- on a paper for that very reason.

Mythee, October 28th, 2006, 8:49 pm


Yaysu! I see now. =O Thanks for answering all of my questions! ^^
My comment on this comic is... YAY TEDDY'S PAST! *goes get popcorn and sits in front of screen, but then remembers that this is not a show but a comic* Dx

Angelzora, October 29th, 2006, 3:16 am


Yay! Now it's readable! The slanted font effect is good for the gypsy scene. Three cheers! ^_^

doom Bubbles, October 30th, 2006, 3:06 am


ah, thats better,

ted says she went to start anew, that's back with the gypsies again right?

FELTY, October 30th, 2006, 6:45 pm


DEFINITELY BETTER! sorry for having to complain about it. it wasn't impossible but then again i usually like to exaggerate but it really is cool now. the slanted words kinda fit into teddy talk about his past.....it could be used like a flashback font.oh..don't forget to answer my previous ques. pretty please.

princessaranel, November 15th, 2006, 8:36 pm


li' Teddy is so cute. He's the momma's boy type. My little brother is the same with my mom. It's sweet.

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