umm, yeah, playing around with text some more. Trying variation for different speakers. I'll be doing this a bit, so please tel me what you think. Is Teddy's text too thin to read?
umm, yeah, Teddy backstory, with little Teddy, back before he died.
I'm thinking of doing a halloween vote incentive, any costume requests?
re Wowfreak2011: thanks, I was sort of dissapointed in it actualy. I think I've one better ones before.
re kreestuh: thanks for the vote of confidence
re rukiaprincess: Thanks again (all you guys are so supportive, yay!)
re teurastaa: more bonding time.
re Nyliak: I don't know, they seemed out of place.
re Theflowerchild: Maneads (sp? whatever). They're just buttons..gold-colored buttons.
re Jayge: I'm gonna have to blurb at the end of the chapter talking about gypsies.
re darklightartist: sorry, Teddy's a sulker, but he'll get a little better as time passes.
re Assuni: people are sort of depressing sometimes. There's gonna be more of this sort of thing later.
re Angelzora:thanks ^^
re Zed Di Dragon: I've been trying to keep Teddy's eyes constantly a bit creepy despite his patheticness.
re doom Bubbles: aww, now what sort of vampire character would he be if he didn't have eating issues?
re VampireKizu: a change of pace is nice, although I think I like wirting for Drake's explanations better, he's less morose.
re Mythee: Drakes 2000+ and Teddy's somewhere in his early twenties, older than Joan. I'm not gonna set specific ages because in the setting I'm using, people would probably be considered adults at a much younger age. A long childhood is sort of a luxury. Both Joan and Teddy are old enough to be considered adults. Actualy, both of them should probably have already been married at their age, but Joan's eye and all the superstitions about it mess things up for her, and was sort of a withdrawn fellos even before the trauma thing happened (his mum sort of raised him appart from the rest of a caravan).
I actualy can answer about Joan being human or not because it's not a plot point or anything. Biologiacaly, she's human, so if you difine it that way, yes, but Solifidians aren't defined by speceis, but by their connection to Bahamoot. Looking at it this way, she's neither Humor nor solifidan. Medians would be something between the two.
re DarkElf92; wow, you just went and commented on a bunch of pages, thanks.
Yeah! Maneads, but not sure if thats how you spell them either.
I don't really like that text, personally. It looks better in the big panel, but in thes first two, looks kind of awkward. And in the second panel, she looks kind of dead. Like her eyes are all rolled up and... *shudders*
my eyes...my eyes..!
sorry but ditto goes for me too.the text is too squished up in the beginnning and ummmm what happened to joan in 2nd?
but the last panel. tres bien. young teddy is drawn really good.he's so cute!!! i love this colouring. not too dark, not too light.
last ques. why is he touching his hand...what is on his hand...is it something of his mom's.
hmmm i can read teddy's text, though you might want to make is somewhat bigger. joan's text is really hard to read.
the last panel is amazing! i love how you layered teddy in the background and his mom and younger teddy look fantastic!
it sucks that she left her child. T^T
And costume ideas? Hmm... My first thought would be the characters from the anime 'Hellsing' which involves vampires... Uhm.. it might be funny to see the characters swap clothes. Beau Beau taking on a humanoid form would just be kinda fun...
Oh, what about FF7 characters? Like Teddy as Vincent, Draco as Cloud, Beau Beau as Red XIII, and Joan as... uhm... Aries?
Yaysu! I see now. =O Thanks for answering all of my questions! ^^
My comment on this comic is... YAY TEDDY'S PAST! *goes get popcorn and sits in front of screen, but then remembers that this is not a show but a comic* Dx
DEFINITELY BETTER! sorry for having to complain about it. it wasn't impossible but then again i usually like to exaggerate but it really is cool now. the slanted words kinda fit into teddy talk about his past.....it could be used like a flashback font.oh..don't forget to answer my previous ques. pretty please.