pg 130 October 24th, 2006, 4:50 pm

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daidaishar, October 24th, 2006, 4:50 pm

this page makes me feel, blah. The layout's bland and the conversation doesn't flow. Plus the shadow thing on Tddy's face in the bottom pannel didn't quite work out. Part of the text folw problem is that's I'm still getting used to writing for Teddy, and he's a bit choppy with his speach, but mostly it's that I have a heavy workload right now, so I don't have the time I would like to fine-tune everything. I should have more time for the next page, and I hope I can make it turn out better.

I'm trying out new font now. I'm not so sure I like the all caps thing this one's got going. What do you all think?

responses (I think I'll keep replying this way since it's easier for you guys to see 'em)

re Willie the Worm: thanks

re VampireKizu: he's going to be doing the sitting-in-the-corner thing a lot.

re rukiaprincess: thanks. I'm pretty happy with my coloring it this point, less so with my lineart...especialy the noses.

re Theflowerchild: thanks (oops, I forgot the bags on this page, no time now I guess [edit] fixed, Teddy's now appropriatly pathetic)

Io is the result of me daydreaming while the class talked about the Bacchae, a play in which crazy women tear cows appart and eat them, and the Io myth, in which Zeau turns one of his mistrusses into a cow so Hera doesn't find her, and Hera posts a watchman with throusands of eyes to watch the cow.

Teddy doesn't have withdrawl yet, he just ate the chick vamp.

re BatsAreFlyingRats: there's a little button at the bottum of the page that says "top webcomics" click on it, vote for me, and then you get to see whatever little drawing I've decided to post there.

re Assuni: well, he'll try, he's still rather close time-wise to the whole trauma thing, but they are taking him to see a shrink, so he'll get himself sorted out in the end.

re doom Bubbles: the incentive made me happy, as does drawing closeups of Teddy

re Doodlebot: of course not.

re Zed Di Dragon: eh, the dark blue smudges under his eyes sort of drifted down a bit. They're supposed to be bags under his eyes. I think you're right, vamps can't blush.

re Wowfreak2011: slowly, and quietly, with rather akward timing.

re Mr.Blackbird: ah, but vampires can controll bugs and rodents, and so they do not bother them. They'll have to hang around there untill the sun sets enough for Teddy to get out and about.

re ZeroRaver: I never realy intended Beau Beau to be the whole cute animal sidekick, but he certainly ended up that way, Bahamoot archtypes are even effecting me, nooooo!

re Full_Metal_Yoai: she's trying to be nice, its just..akward, really akward, especialy since he overheard the argument with Drake.

re TheoryMage; Joan'll manage one way or another, and don't worry. Teddy will be around for a while.

re Acuturbo: with the way he's acting, she'd be hard-pressed to find a good reason not to be nice to him. She probably could, but she's not that much of a jerk.

re darklightartist: he's just sort of a pitiful being in general.

re Angelzora: 'nother update, just as you asked.

re teurastaa: honestly, he is a bit of a nuisance, but we love him anyway.

re Tacto: Thanks, it's always nice to get such positive feedback ^^ World building is one of my favorite parts of writing. i'm not sure how much of it I'll be able to work into the comic though...

re Mythee: there are plenty of vampire-related coplications that he has to deal with, but hopfully nothing too bad since he's had a rough time of it as it is.

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teurastaa, October 24th, 2006, 7:20 pm

I think it was amazing also ^^ I realy like it. :3 yay for teddy and joan bonding ^___^

Nyliak, October 24th, 2006, 7:41 pm

I love the shadows! Watcha talking about?

Theflowerchild, October 24th, 2006, 8:22 pm

Ah, you mean those drunk chicks that Dyonysus used to rip people apart? What are they called again?

Anyways, I really like this page. You did a great job in the last big panel. His eyes are so evil! they look like the eye of Sauron in LOTR! And does Teddy really have cufflinks? Why aren't they in any fun shape?

Jayge, October 24th, 2006, 8:39 pm

2nd to last panel... amazing... 0.0

Yay! Gypsie culture!

darklightartist, October 24th, 2006, 8:47 pm

awsome look on the second to last panel. ^^ He really needs to stop sulking...soon atleast. Even if he is a vampire...

Assuni, October 24th, 2006, 9:22 pm

That sceond to last panel was actually pretty cool! I also like the new font.
It makes me sad to think that humans were so mean to gypsies. People always seem to be like that when around people/things that are just a little different than what they're used to. And if they hear bad stories about these different people/things, that makes it worse. People can be so ignorant sometimes.

Angelzora, October 25th, 2006, 3:34 am

Yay! You updated! ^_^
Yep. The last panel in particular looks very nice indeed. Love the shadows!

Zed Di Dragon, October 25th, 2006, 6:17 am

Those eyes just creep me out with it's detailness.


doom Bubbles, October 25th, 2006, 6:34 am

deh eye's are awsomely done
heh it'll be interesting to see what happens when ted, starts with the craveings..
if he's with them long enough that is.

VampireKizu, October 25th, 2006, 7:15 am

Now he''s not that bad of a vampire :P & It's a switch drake isn't doing the explaining this time.

Wicked hot eyes!

Mythee, October 25th, 2006, 3:42 pm

Yah... ._. How old is he, anyways? Methinks it was probably said before but I forgot xP

I wish I could ask you for the outright answer if Joan's really human or not. Yar. xP;; *curious*

flying-angel, November 11th, 2006, 8:26 am

he is so cute. I can't believe he has to go through this!

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