u never know what just might happen BUT
I SO WANT THAT TO HAPPEN. DRAKE AND JOAN to be or not to be that is the question.
really cool first three panels, i like the close ups too. drake looks so non- drake when he's sleeping lol
This is a very good comic for your first! ^^ I feel sorry for Teddy xD;; ...I hope he doesn't run away. I feel painful just thinking about poor Drake and Joan having to look for the dude. Not because that would be too much of a problem for them (probably), but because I lose things and have to look for them so often that... *sob* Aah, the world is so cruel T_T
This is possibly the first time I've ever posted a comment, but you deserve it. The artwork is absolutely amazing, the story line is awesome, and you even develop your characters so that your readers can get to "know" them, so to speak. Keep up the great work.
re Sidheprincezzz: hmm, someone's had sugar. we shall see how the next pages play out.
re VampireKizu: eh, staying up all night saving sad little vampires earns sleeping in.
re teurastaa: I got a new picture editing program, it had new filter effects, I got to mess around with flares, it made me happy.
re doom Bubbles: ^^
re UglyKitten: The blue ness leaving means that Drake won't have the complementary color thing going for his eyes, which is rather sad really, but that's ok, I'm sure he'll survive.
re FELTY: I'm glad that you're expecting twists, means that I havent been devoured by cliche (it was the page where I randomly killed him that did it, huh?).
re BatsAreFlyingRats: I think I'll call it my pacing bird. I've used in pannels when I need a pause in order for the page to flow right. It also seems to come before blood, which works since it's a crow/raven
re Mythee: Thanks ^^ Drake would probably be quite miffed if Teddy ran off, wouldn't he? Joan would probably be releived.
re Assuni: wha, two new comenting people, with long comments, I feel like christmas came early. Thank you. I do like doing character development above almost everything else, so I usualy put it above things like plot.
Those passage of time panels were a great idea. Looks wonderful.
lol...I just had a funny, impossible thought. What if Joan was sleeping next to Drake for comfort and Teddy was sleeping next to Joan for the same reason. She wakes, freaks and pushes him away. It wouldn't work in this scene though, because they're near the cave entrance.