pg 268 March 18th, 2009, 11:29 am

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daidaishar, March 18th, 2009, 11:02 am

oh no, it's a flashback within a flashback! I think I broke time or something. Just for clarification, Brittany is narrating this page.

Sorry about the late update. I blame it on a combination of me having an essay due, my mom coming to visit me in Scotland and us going to oodles of castles together, and me totaly geeking out over the new Watchmen movie. On that note, you should totaly go see Watchmen. I know it's gotten some mixed reviews, and while I do agree with some of the critique (except all the people bitching about Dr. Manhattan's lack of pants, for real people, if your old enough to see a rated R movie, you really should be mature enough to deal with nudity), but thought that it was just minor nit-picking that didn't really hurt the overall movie. The actors were terrific (especially the fellow who played Rorschach) and really carried the film. Most of the other fans of the comic book seem to have had a positive reaction to it too, despite some of the scenes that they had to cut for time reasons and such. So yeah, if you're mature enough to deal with the violence and Dr. Manhattan's disregard for clothing you should totally go see it.

Anyway, that's enough of me geeking out, on to the page. Dragons aren't allowed to bring weapons to meetings, so even though the Drakes are big-bad warriors, there's only so much they can do unarmed and without magic against a group of fully outfitted soldiers. Traditionally, parts of dragons, especially their blood and hearts are supposed to have magical properties if consumed, granting things like superhuman strength and immortality. You can even see it in popular modern fantasy like Harry Potter, where dragon-heart strings can serve as a magical core for wands.

re tricorn5: ok, glad to see I was worried over nothing.

re Onasaki: I've actualy seen some things were folks post generic lineart (usualy of wolves) and let people design their own characters by coloring them in. I though that that was kinda a cool idea and might set something like that up here.

re Kaiyaweird: thanks ^_^

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Jinny, March 18th, 2009, 1:39 pm

A small typo, in the second panel. "Out" would be "Our". ^^;

Just to let you know. I feel that you had a few run-on sentences but... it matches her telling the story. =)

Onasaki, March 18th, 2009, 3:09 pm

Yes. Flashback within a flashback! Totally breaking time! XD But now I'm worried for Drake's Family..

Humans are mean little bastards.. They should all be killed. >.>

Tenshi Yami no Neko, March 18th, 2009, 3:57 pm

Oh, poor Britany. She's probably blaming herself for not being able to protect her family even though she couldn't do anything to prevent anything from happening.

I'm starting to worry about Drakes family, as well. They could be being attacked right this moment! And frisia's family too!

Kaiyaweird, March 18th, 2009, 5:24 pm

poor Britany. I really like the last panel. Its a serious moment but they look cute sitting together like that.

doom Bubbles, March 19th, 2009, 6:13 am

sneaky little humans.

Zoula, March 19th, 2009, 3:02 pm

Aw very sad. I'm wondering if the flashback is coming nearer to the end? Drake flies back and his family has been attacked also..?

Speculation. :D

Oh and I see another typo in the third panel. It says "For those of use" rather than "us".~

azureremix, March 20th, 2009, 7:51 pm

My friend told me Watchmen was based on a novel...o_o

But anyway, wonderful work as usual! I really really like the designs of the dragons from the last few pages too and the sceneries are stunning~! ^_^

tricorn5, March 22nd, 2009, 8:27 am

Wowee. That's a lotta exposition.

Woah! You even went to the trouble of putting accurate footprints in the sand! *awe*

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