Drake is changeing tactics, lets hope this one works better.
I'm still not happy with the way Drake turned out on this page, although Joan turned out surprisingly well. My arm isn't quite well yet, and drawing with it seems to make matters worse, so I'm giving it for a rest for a bit. Luckily, the lovely luciferownsme of the comic Rice (http://rice.smackjeeves.com/ ) has volunteered to do the penciling and inking for me, thus saving you all from updates in either stick figures or left-handed drawings. So she'll be doing the lineart for the next few pages, a big round of applause for her. While you're waiting for the next update, go check out her comic. It's got vampires. it makes me laugh. you can't go wrong, clickey, clickey http://rice.smackjeeves.com/
The artist of Rice is gonna be doing your art stuffs for a while? Suh-weet! ^__^ lol, and I think the thing that's off about Drake seems to be his ears. And you seem to be having a bit of trouble with profiles of late. o.0
Will Joan fall for Drake's new tactic...? Somehow, I think Joan's smarter than that...but the way Drake talks, I dunno...this is a tough call. -_-
Right then. I forgot my old account's password, so i made another. But thats not important.
I love the first two panels, they look really nice, and you did amazingly well on them.
The third panel was also pretty damn good, but Drake in the 4th panel, he looks VERY gangly. Like so gangly that if I were a vulture that hadn't eaten in months, and I found him dead on the side of the road, I STILL wouldn't touch it. He just looks so thin!
But I just LOVE the last panel. I think it's awesome! Except for drake's crooked mouth, just the angle and the detail and the EYES!EXCLAMATION MARK!!1!!ONE!
Oh, and if you need any help with the arm, I could come over and hug it untill it gets better ^.^
re Lucida (and UglyKitten: I'm glad so many folks read her stuff.
re UglyKitten: I know, the deterioration of the way I draw profiles is realy bugging me because I was quite proud of the way they used to be.
re daishar: yay for more Drake fans. I think he was getting a bit jealous about all the fuss over Teddy, which is a bad thing since he's currently the only on on Teddy's side.
re joey790: noramly I'd just try to work through it, but I'm kinda worried about overworking my arm and it not healing correctly.
re Wowfreak2011: I kinda had to go back and fix Drake's chin in the seccond pannel on the computer.
re Roy D Mylote: thanks
re Theflowerchild *mental image of red latched onto arm...arm falls off* heh, that's ok Red. It's good to hear from you.
I may be PMing you later for html help though. I'm working on prettying up the site. Things are under controll at the moment, but, considering how little I remember from the computer classes 4+ years ago, that could change real quickly.
OMGWTFPWN! IT'S ALL DIFFERENT! *world crashes on head* EVERYONE RUN!
Speaking of which, isn't yoda COOL?
No, seriously, site looks WAY cool so far, keep up the good work! ^.^ I like that banner thingy at the top of the page, but it makes me feel like I'm not srolled up all the way, kind of upsetting to a computer geek like meself :'(