pg 250 October 4th, 2008, 12:00 pm

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daidaishar, October 4th, 2008, 11:48 am

touchy touchy.

The loners that they're talking about are younger siblings that decide to strike out on their own or old leaders after they step down. They'll live on the family territory, but apart from the others as hermits essentially. Their land isn't as ideal as the main families and tends to push them in greater contact with humans. These are the dragons that tend to show up in the classic stories.


re Onasaki:Only the second child becomes a a Drake. The younger ones could potentially try an overthrow, but If they did they would be facing both the eldest and their Drake, considerably worse odds (especially since dragons traditionally get more powerful with age). Usually these odds will discourage the youngest from ever trying.

re Zheyna: yup, looks like Drake's mom had a bit of trouble in her past.

re Neko with a Katana: ^_^

re Imola: heh, the line tool doesn't turn out so well for ruins.

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LuluMoon, October 4th, 2008, 12:27 pm

I think that guy is right!
I know something bad is going to happen! >.<
I can't wait to find out what happens next!!!

Mazt, October 4th, 2008, 2:09 pm

You add so much detail into your lore and background stories. It's wonderful to just read. Then again I'm just a little weird like that.
Can't wait to see what shall happen.

Jinny, October 5th, 2008, 12:13 am

I like the guy who's paranoid... :D!!
We, humans, are too curious that we mess up everything! Lol.
What's his name? :3

Onasaki, October 5th, 2008, 1:35 am

I'm seeing some improvement with the faces! Great job! Also, there's a couple of typos.

Last Panel, "killer"

Second Panel: "Say"

I'm guessing the second panel is suposed to be "Way" and the last "Killed"? Just lettin' ya know!

Also, did that one drake have a name? I think he was called "Devon"? *boggles*

Imola, October 5th, 2008, 1:56 am

Hmmm, the disadvantages of the dragon system are showing...

But fighting here is supposed to be prohibited, is it not?

I probably said this on the previous page to but I love to death how you' re doing that stone texture. ^_^

BatsAreFlyingRats, October 6th, 2008, 12:00 am

Are these the Drakes?

This page is really good.

Tenshi Yami no Neko, October 6th, 2008, 7:37 pm

Am I seeing twins?????? Actually, I was are the dragons in your story born (eggs or like mammals)? And if like mammals, what happens if twins are born after the first child????

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