Awesome. Just awesome. I look and look for anything i could critique you on, it took a bit of looking but I found it. First Panel. Horse. a, horse doesn't have any join in its front right leg. b, no horse has the ability to have 3/4 legs off the ground at the same time, at least not like that.
re air-wave: always happy to find out about readers
re Butterscotch: Drake has major issues
re Redsweathshirt: I used a short of a horse at a canter as referance, and at that gate they can have only one leg on the ground at a time. The front right leg if fully straitened, but because of the size od the horse in the drawing the joint definition got lost.
Him yelling at the horse is happy. I just realized this though. Horses have round eyes as opposed to narrow eyes like that. I think there should be an exclamation point after "I eat things like you". It just reads wrong without one. Also... I dunno, something's a bit off with Drake's head in the second panel...It seems like either he should have a bit of eye and noses, or the jaw should be different... something. I dunno...
re dirtsa: don't worry, the horse is safe
re Zheyna: I tried the realistic, rounded eyes, but they made the horse look far too good-natured. I ment the "eat things like you" to be a deadpan statement rather than and exclamation, and I tend to neglect myexclamation marks, poor things. as far as the fourth pannel goes, I should find some sort of referance since I find that angle very problematic
re Zheyna: yes, the eyes will be rounder when the horse gets less cranky.
re galaxylion and Butterscotch: darn, my clever plot device for introducing the animal side-kick has been seen through. curses!
re galaxylion: hugs for poor Drake, he gets no love from vilagers or horses.
re DARK_Yukari: thats a pity, children make such useful minions, they're so easily influenced
re mimi: i'm sorry, it's a pain when your pet hates you, especialy something like a horse