pg67 March 12th, 2006, 8:18 pm

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daidaishar, March 12th, 2006, 8:19 pm

aww, all soundless and sad.

The horse can't understand Drake, but Drake feels like yelling at it anyway. It messed up his flawless first fight after all. Yes Mina, Drake would dearly like to eat the horse.

I still haven't figured out my updating days yet, but I think I'll have the next page up on thursday.

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air-wave, March 12th, 2006, 9:03 pm

Cool, I like the part with the horse and Drake having a little "talk". I wait and wait all day for you to update. I love your style, Keep up the good work!

Butterscotch, March 12th, 2006, 9:24 pm

Drake has issues >_>

The clouds look really great! ^-^

Redsweathshirt, March 13th, 2006, 12:09 am

Awesome. Just awesome. I look and look for anything i could critique you on, it took a bit of looking but I found it. First Panel. Horse. a, horse doesn't have any join in its front right leg. b, no horse has the ability to have 3/4 legs off the ground at the same time, at least not like that.

daidaishar, March 13th, 2006, 9:12 am

re air-wave: always happy to find out about readers
re Butterscotch: Drake has major issues

re Redsweathshirt: I used a short of a horse at a canter as referance, and at that gate they can have only one leg on the ground at a time. The front right leg if fully straitened, but because of the size od the horse in the drawing the joint definition got lost.

dirtsa, March 13th, 2006, 10:50 am

Please don't kill the horse Drake, it's so awesome.

Really like the fourth panel, you can just see how annoyed Drake is, but the last panel is also very cool.

Zheyna, March 13th, 2006, 5:23 pm

Him yelling at the horse is happy. I just realized this though. Horses have round eyes as opposed to narrow eyes like that. I think there should be an exclamation point after "I eat things like you". It just reads wrong without one. Also... I dunno, something's a bit off with Drake's head in the second panel...It seems like either he should have a bit of eye and noses, or the jaw should be different... something. I dunno...

daidaishar, March 13th, 2006, 6:44 pm

re dirtsa: don't worry, the horse is safe
re Zheyna: I tried the realistic, rounded eyes, but they made the horse look far too good-natured. I ment the "eat things like you" to be a deadpan statement rather than and exclamation, and I tend to neglect myexclamation marks, poor things. as far as the fourth pannel goes, I should find some sort of referance since I find that angle very problematic

Zheyna, March 13th, 2006, 8:54 pm

Ah, that makes sense. This must be a mean horsie, after all.

galaxylion, March 13th, 2006, 9:40 pm

i like the horse i hope you keep it with the group and maybe it will grow on drake and joan

Butterscotch, March 13th, 2006, 10:38 pm

Joan and the horse will probably be the best of friends, since neither is too fond of Drake :P

galaxylion, March 14th, 2006, 10:53 am

yeah that probaly happen poor drake gets no love

DARK_Yukari, March 14th, 2006, 11:21 am

I used that strewn all over the ground thing at some anoying kids I think there afraid of me now^^;

mimi, March 14th, 2006, 7:20 pm

The tension o__x;;
My horse Mandy is like that. She hates me XDD
Aaah I had alot of pages to catch up on!
But it's all goood~~

daidaishar, March 14th, 2006, 7:22 pm

re Zheyna: yes, the eyes will be rounder when the horse gets less cranky.

re galaxylion and Butterscotch: darn, my clever plot device for introducing the animal side-kick has been seen through. curses!
re galaxylion: hugs for poor Drake, he gets no love from vilagers or horses.

re DARK_Yukari: thats a pity, children make such useful minions, they're so easily influenced

re mimi: i'm sorry, it's a pain when your pet hates you, especialy something like a horse

galaxylion, March 15th, 2006, 3:56 am

i feel for drake but you know not all dragons are bad. He could have easily destroyed the village joan lived in but he didnt so he's not all bad, he makes the perfect anti-hero

Gregory Williams, March 15th, 2006, 8:26 pm

Horse got pwned.

Kattanie, July 1st, 2006, 9:10 am

That horse looks really evil.

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