kind of a "meh" page, especialy after all the fun of the last one. the combined hatching on Drake and the horse made some pannels very buisy, and i didn't do anything fun with the backgrounds. (I'm also fairly sure that Drake is breaking the laws of physics with how he's getting onto the horse, but hey, if Legolas could do it, so can Drake).
At least Drake has learned not to try and parry warhammers this time around.
thank you all for your lovely feedback. you can't realy tell on this page, but I'm keeping it in mind for future pages.
I likes it a lot! Sound effects around pretty cool, ,but find a better font to do them in, because this one sucks. 1st panel: Cool, just PLEASE get a better font, even the squiggly lines don't make up for the font. 2nd Pane: Very good, but again, the font. Also, the horse looks like it's possessed. 3rd panel: arms aren't that stick like, usually they bend at the wrist. Even in that swing, it should be slightly angled towards the knight, thats whats normal. 4th Panel: :) 5th Panel: Had to take like fifteen looks at it to get was going on, i think the problem is that the knight's legs are too much thicker than they look like in other panels, just too busy. Last Panel: Here i understood the entire rest of the comic, VERY well done, 'cept some things look a little rushed, as if you rushed to update, which you probably did. I LOVE the horse's sound effects, especially the whinny, makes the horse just so COOL!
re Aquilo: the last pannel is fairly confusing, prety much the knight is thrown off balance by Drake haling himself up onto the horse, so he accedentaly hauls back on the reigns.
re redsweathshirt: my photoshop's text adding abilities and possible the wort in the wrold, that, added with my own horrendous sound effect skills yeaids kinda pathetic sound effects. I'm going to try and get cerise to be my sound ediot for future pages.
Any fallacies in this page are countered by the awesomeness of the last panel. You can figure out exactly what is happening, the knight looks scared out of his wits (even though you can't see his expression), and the horse....the horse is über.
well although i kinda liked the other version of this page (cocky jerk gets beaten :P)
i like this too :)
AND after a bit of luck i think (hope) i figured out why hes doing this :)
He just wants the horse right? im sure he mentioned a lil while ago that he wanted to get her a horse so she could move a bit faster :)