Wow, this is amazing. Just Amazing.This one looks absolutley beautiful. The only problem i can see? Darke in the last panel. I'm not really sure what it is, i think the head and his stance, but it just doesn't seem natural or like anything else you've drawn, doesn't seem right. But the Knight looks SO much better! I'm actually starting to like him and his foolishness. And his Horse looks pretty bad ass too. Too bad it can't last. And to warn you, you've only fed fuel to the fire of Darke fan-girls, watch out. Also I love the new shading for the knight, looks really good. Keep it up Daidai! Oh, and maybe take some time off, you spend too much time on this.
But I LIKE Drake in the last panel. His Utter Lack of Fighting Stance is... cocky. Very Drake. Yeah, there should be a sound effect... he's drawing his sword, so maybe a ring? Or you could have the horse rearing loudly and neighing... Something like that.
Oh, and I think you should capitalize "tch" in Drake's first speech bubble, so the sentence can start with a capital.
re red: Drake in the last pannel took far too long considering how small he is, I was trying to make him in proportion to the horse, the knight, and himself, and managed to fail at all three. finaly I gave up because it was getting late and I needed to update
i initialy capitalised "tch, but Tch doesn't look appealing to me for some reason, so I changed it back to tch, it seems more soude effecty to me somehow, I don't know, I think I may just be a bit weird for caring what words look like, but yeah, I'm gonna use the "artistic liscence cop out"
re Gregory Williams: you're right about the elbow...damn. I think I forgot to ink it