ch 4 fin July 25th, 2007, 9:00 am

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daidaishar, July 25th, 2007, 8:52 am

yup, chapter 4 has finaly come to an end.

Important things I've learned this chapter? That having a fight scene that's essentialy four fights back to back is way too long.

Next chapter will be starting up in about a week or two, in the meantime you'll get to see some of the lovely fanart that I've been sent, and maybe a preveiw of a treat I've been working on as we approach the 200 page mark.


re TheDemonDragonCat: I had something like that once. it was a black sausage pastry thing in Ireland. it was quite tasty.

re Butterscotch: XP innacurate speach bubbleness.

re Angelzora: At least he'll get his space now.

re kasi: Teddy tends to be on the quiet side, and he likes being in controll, but every once and a while a bit of bitterness shows.
re Zheyna: yes, Teddy is vary tall, and Drake is slightly on the shorter side because he calibrated his height whenhumans were much shorter. And yeah, Teddy's berhaps not as upset about the deaths as a villager might be, because people have rarely given him a reason to feel compasionate towards tham. Of course, he's probably feeling bad and even more like a monster because he knows that he's not entirely sorry. He's also upset because he's freaked out by what he's capable of.

re teurastaa: three is you count Beau Beau, although atleast he tends to be pissy on her behalf.

re Captain Shinji: XP

re 2SkyDrago: and the scales wouldn't absorb the blood like cloth and fur would anyways.

re bloomygirl315: yup. Teddy's sad and wants his space.

re paw_07: just don't tell him that.

re doom Bubbles: yup, although I'm fairly sure that Drake would have interveined before it came to that.

re Neko with a Katana: luckily he should cool down in a bit.

re tricorn5: best thing to do is just give him his space.

re godhand1514: eh, Teddy's a bit of a loner anyways, so he just wants his space.

re Wowfreak2011: He's being defensive and touchy.

re kreestuh: Drake enjoys being a smartass.

re PJupiter: hmmm, for Teddy we can rework it so that it's Post Manslaughter Syndrome.

re TheoryMage: hmmm, we'll have to pay Kyle a little visit in this chapter break, won't we?

re BatsAreFlyingRats: and a nap. cranky child.

re Vine_Gar: sarcasm is a marvelous thing. I don't know what I would do without it.

re xx_dark_desires_xx: I do feel bad for her. I mean, she's doing he best to be nice.

re Assuni: I'm not sure. It's a purifying force, so maybe it burns like sunlight and such.

xx_dark_desires_xx, July 25th, 2007, 9:47 am

Ke ke ke! First comment! Can't wait for the next chapters!!! *Vibrates in chair*

stevebarns, July 25th, 2007, 12:03 pm

hehe nice

TheDemonDragonCat, July 25th, 2007, 2:21 pm

Yeah i've had blood cookies before too... stupid jerks an they're practical jokes.

kasi, July 25th, 2007, 4:12 pm

Are those the villagers Teddy ended up killing?..... Go Teddy!! *snickers* Hope the next chapter comes soon cuz I love this story!

Angelzora, July 26th, 2007, 3:23 am

Yay! Can't wait for chapter five! XD

Imola, July 28th, 2007, 10:43 am

They were sooo nice, they didn`t even have a bit of prejudice, so they ended up in heaven, too... Does that mean that trying to murder someone only counts when it`s really done?

Mr.Blackbird, August 1st, 2007, 4:36 pm

Hey i just got an idea for your comic... and now i lost it. =(

2SkyDragon, August 6th, 2007, 4:24 pm

Yeah! So he'd just have random blood stains on blood-colored scales. XD

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