pg 389 October 18th, 2013, 1:26 pm

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daidaishar, October 18th, 2013, 1:41 pm

I had to shrink down the font size a bit to make it fit, so I may go back and change the font if it is too difficult to read.


re Naya: ^_^

re Mina_Lunga:

re Arrikanez: all the more reason for you to be on your best behavior Ay.

re dragonmaiden50: yup, the poor girl needed some power of her own finally.

re Eva Emaria: It just seemed somehow appropriate, and it used up the space well.

re Kadtie: thanks. I'm trying to do things to highlight that they're not living on quite the same plane of existence as the rest of reality.

re Onasaki: *evil grin*

re Imola: well, at least its not fire.

re man in black: thanks ^_^

re pfmoi:Trickster is sharing some of his motives, but I'm not sure if that makes him any more trustworthy.

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Onasaki, October 18th, 2013, 7:13 pm

The font is a little hard to read, but this looks like it might get interesting...

man in black, October 18th, 2013, 8:56 pm

great page

Ddraigeneth, October 18th, 2013, 9:12 pm

It's more the contrast than the font size, the edges are just too bright behind the words.

Arrikanez, October 19th, 2013, 2:54 am

Ay: *Whimpers* Yessim...

That text is a little hard to read, but then again, I have bad eyes. XD I can make out what it says, though.

Hmmm.. Trickster being legitimately helpful? Somehow, I'm not convinced.

Stardreamer, October 19th, 2013, 8:41 am

Yay the Trickster is back!
The text was a little fuzzy to me but stepping up the zoom on my browser worked fine.

Storyteller's are the Trickster's domain, I hadn't thought of that but it makes sense.

Kadtie, October 20th, 2013, 12:57 am

I didn't have any trouble reading the font, but I read elementary-school-aged children's handwriting for a living.

You do a great job of portraying them as on a different plane of existence--as well as consciousness--if you ask me. I am loving it. Keep it up!

Jae87, October 22nd, 2013, 8:14 pm

The font was fine on the last page, but now it's proving difficult to understand x_x

Mina_Lunga, October 23rd, 2013, 6:29 pm

I had to squint and get close to my monitor to read the font, but I suppose that fits with a trickster character. I still enjoy seeing the bodies made of words, and the idea that story is the most powerful element of a world.

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