pg 176 April 25th, 2007, 7:30 pm

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daidaishar, April 25th, 2007, 7:34 pm

not sure if the middle two pannels are clear, but Drake's doing something called a disengage. It's a basic move where you move your weapon around a attemped block to hit them in an open area.


re Eppl: thanks for catching that, fixed it.

re Angelzora: oop, dialogue and backgrounds dissapeared for a bit again ^_^:

re PJupiter: and his son is bleeding at the base of a tree.

re TheDemonDragonCat: that help your dillema?

re bloomygirl315: sort of saving, not sure if he would see it that way.

re Bearagirl119: sorry about internet woes, mine has been acting a bit odd too.

re comic king: well, hope you enjoyed that.

re off-white: Drake's ears are a bit large and yoda-ish, huh?

re Butterscotch: chubby and huggable.

re wavycleft: mm, I'm going to say about a third.

re stevebarns: looks like it so far.

re sarall: maybe, we'll have to wait for that particular fallout a little longer.

re kasi: well, he gets to steal all the thunder again as he is so prone to.

re teurastaa: still a bit of a one-sided fight so far.

re amiko_16: he certainly waited long enough as it is.

re 2SkyDragon: each person has a color associated with them realy. Drake's red, Teddy's blue, and joan's yellow, although I think I'll change it to green latter.

re Zed Di Dragon: only when he's being stupid, and possibly not even then.

re Wowfreak2011: Drake is starting off on a good foot.

re OrangeRamen: Beowulf? cool. I did enjoy that story.

re Imola: indeed.

re Caz Teh Frog: ah, playing rough with animals is most of the fun of having a pet.

re Jin Tae: and possibly a replacement for every part considering the rust it must have.

re Mr.Blackbird: maybe...

re Zheyna: it happened because I had a lapse of attention and drew it on the wrong side XP

re paw_07: well, more head-smaking and facial expressions.

re tRickityHouses: mmm, about half an hour-ish?

re dirtsa: it is sort of a fighting set up image, isn't it?

re OnionBoy: oop, diologue and background goes bye bye again.

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Angelzora, April 25th, 2007, 7:35 pm

Did I get first comment?

EDIT: Yes! I did!! XD

o_O Oh noes! The background and dialogue poofed away again!! T_T

Hmm...I think you could work a little on the action on this page. But I do like the expressions shown by Teddy!

How many pages left? Seven or six?

trenton_dawn, April 25th, 2007, 7:41 pm

Yeah, well I got second place! There's nothing wrong with second :)

Angelzora, April 25th, 2007, 7:44 pm

XD Yes there is... :p

Theflowerchild, April 25th, 2007, 8:09 pm

Wow, third (or fourth). Go me. So when I looked t this comic, it seemed wrong, and I know what it is. When people fist fight, they don't do it standing at attention. His shoulders should be low, he should have his knewws bent, he should be leaning forward with one side. In short, he should be in a fighting stance. I could imagine if he was just being cocky, but after getting hit once (4th panel), he should loosen up a bit. Also, it doesn't seem like the personality of a blood crazed vampire to be cocky in that fashion, maybe as in rsiking things, but no in the way that you just stand there and wait to get hit.

tricorn5, April 25th, 2007, 8:09 pm

Kick his butt! But don't break his face, he's too cute. *drags Teddy away*

bloomygirl315, April 25th, 2007, 8:42 pm

lol yeah, thats true. I wouldnt be suprised if he's charging the townsfolk $7 a minute for helping them with this XD

No-Name9, April 25th, 2007, 8:55 pm

Cool move. X)

off-white, April 25th, 2007, 9:58 pm

Wow, you're right... Throw in some green skin, some backwards sentences and there you go.

OnionBoy, April 25th, 2007, 10:36 pm

No more dialog or backgrounds...nice

@ theflowerchild
True...but Teddy being hit by a stick is hardly your average fist fight

TheDemonDragonCat, April 26th, 2007, 4:10 am

umm... GO DRAKE!!! just.. don't kill him...

silversoul, April 26th, 2007, 5:46 am

hahah, Teddy's getting pwnd by a stick XD
so much for vampire algitly.

Imola, April 26th, 2007, 12:00 pm

After History lessons now we get a fencing lesson. Oh, great. :D

Mr.Blackbird, April 26th, 2007, 1:29 pm

Wonderful. Cant we do a far shot of them fighting until Teddy finally gets tired enough to change back? That way it would be over in a page or 2 and we can get back to the story. We've only been in the same village cave for the 50 or so pages...literally go back and count if you dont beilive me

teurastaa, April 26th, 2007, 7:26 pm

oooooo teddy gets his butt kiiiicked. oh nos!

paw_07, April 27th, 2007, 12:20 am

(giggle) Poor teddy just killed a whole bunch of villagers yet he can't take on a stick?

Zed Di Dragon, April 27th, 2007, 3:14 pm

Of course not; It's a really long stick.

wickedhippie300, April 27th, 2007, 4:08 pm

and it's made of oak, and everyone knows that as saplings all oaks are trained in the ancient chinese arts of battle.

Imola, April 28th, 2007, 8:28 am

Yeah, both Teddy and Joan are weak against the parts of that tree.

PJupiter, April 29th, 2007, 9:55 am

yes well i suppose if his son is bleeding at the base of a tree, the mayor might as well go help him while he's at it.. yes yes! that's it he's not running away! he's just going to the rescue of his son! i knew the mayor wasn't a coward! hah! although i wouldn't want to be caught between these two fighting! go drake! teach that silly vampirey-boy a lesson!

ooh! and it's sooo hard to draw faces when they're looking up like in the last panel there, but you did a really good job!! it's perfect!

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