Wow, third (or fourth). Go me. So when I looked t this comic, it seemed wrong, and I know what it is. When people fist fight, they don't do it standing at attention. His shoulders should be low, he should have his knewws bent, he should be leaning forward with one side. In short, he should be in a fighting stance. I could imagine if he was just being cocky, but after getting hit once (4th panel), he should loosen up a bit. Also, it doesn't seem like the personality of a blood crazed vampire to be cocky in that fashion, maybe as in rsiking things, but no in the way that you just stand there and wait to get hit.
Wonderful. Cant we do a far shot of them fighting until Teddy finally gets tired enough to change back? That way it would be over in a page or 2 and we can get back to the story. We've only been in the same village cave for the 50 or so pages...literally go back and count if you dont beilive me
yes well i suppose if his son is bleeding at the base of a tree, the mayor might as well go help him while he's at it.. yes yes! that's it he's not running away! he's just going to the rescue of his son! i knew the mayor wasn't a coward! hah! although i wouldn't want to be caught between these two fighting! go drake! teach that silly vampirey-boy a lesson!
ooh! and it's sooo hard to draw faces when they're looking up like in the last panel there, but you did a really good job!! it's perfect!