pg 173 April 18th, 2007, 7:36 pm

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daidaishar, April 18th, 2007, 7:28 pm

updating early because I can.

no, Fitz's dad doesn't have super speed, he's just lucky in having a weapon that's good for speed and control. All he really needs to do to attack is move his wrist and forearms a bit, which makes him much faster than the guys wielding weapons that you really had to wind up and swing. Knowing what he's doing helps a lot too, but Teddy seems to think he has things back under control.

I really shouldn't have dressed Teddy in a white shirt, the bloodstains are getting sort of irritating.


re off-white: yeah, honestly I'm starting to wish that I'd made this a bit shorter since I've got some character and back-story development right after this that I'm itching to get to.

re axielouise: thanks, I sort of thought that they were a bit static, so I'm going to try and get better, but I'm glad you enjoyed them.

re 2SkyDragon: Red a blue are really starting to dominate the color scheme.

re OnionBoy: OnionBoy, meet Fitz's dad. He's the mayor of the happy little village, and probably the only one in the entire group with an ounce of sense. He showed up shortly after Fitz did in the previous chapter.

re stevebarns: I have a bad habit of letting characters chill in limbo during fight scenes, don't I? The lag between pages doesn't help either.

re Wowfreak2011: hmm, can vamps have kiddies?
re Mr.Blackbird: hmm, what sort of job would a vamp be good at? assassin I guess, but that's not a very big market, is it? plus I can't see Teddy being too enthusiastic.

re Zheyna: thanks for the support ^_^

re Angelzora: Teddy's supposed to be standing and spinning around to slash at him for the last panel...maybe adding more speed lines tracing his movement would help...

re BatsAreFlyingRats: decapitation can immobilize him long enough for cremation, and being minced up isn't that healthy for any being.

re Doodlebot: he's by far the most capable fellow of the lot of them.

re tRickityHouses: if at first you don't succeed, try, try again.

re Assuni: yeah, I kinda imagine him sounding like a realy ticked off cat.

re Nyliak: what sort of self-respecting bear goes without blood stains? even the cubs need to eat...On an entirely differnt note, I had a weird dream where I was on a pirate ship that crashed on an island and I got attacked by a puppy that tried to rip out the throat...weird, huh? My dreams with puppies are scarier than the ones with zombies.

re kasi: the problem with getting involved in the fight at all is that Teddy realy isn't in a state where he's going to differentiate between friend and foe, so Drake's just trying to stay off the radar entirely.

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stevebarns, April 18th, 2007, 7:53 pm

*yeah i know what you mean i do that alot to* hahaha what a noob he cant hit a side of a wall *jk i know vampiers are hard to hit*

2SkyDragon, April 18th, 2007, 8:13 pm

Haven't noticed, but they really are the dominate colors right now...

*Reads anxiously*

paw_07, April 18th, 2007, 8:17 pm

Now he’s getting cocky … and you know what happens when you get cocky … bam, slash … there goes a pinky and that means no more tea for you.

OnionBoy, April 18th, 2007, 8:18 pm

Teddy's going down.
Fitz's dad has a sssssswmp sword

off-white, April 18th, 2007, 8:29 pm

Can't wait for the story to come back, The action is cool, but I love the story for Hurrocks.

Mythic, April 18th, 2007, 8:59 pm

oooooh.....great expressions! I can't wait for the next page!

Angelzora, April 18th, 2007, 9:22 pm

*agrees with off-white about the story thing* Any indication of how many pages we have to wait until the story comes back? ^^"

EDIT: Are you entering the Gaia Comic Awards? :D

tricorn5, April 18th, 2007, 9:46 pm

Oh my. I hope Teddy doesn't kill too many more people, he seems to have eliminated most of the village's men.

amiko_16, April 18th, 2007, 10:33 pm

looks like he got his confidence back XD;;

tressel barkley, April 18th, 2007, 10:58 pm

lots of blood and swishies! or whatever noise the sword is making... uhhh wow.

tRickityHouses, April 18th, 2007, 11:07 pm

yeah injuries are annoying to keep repeating in comics.

LadyNightshade, April 18th, 2007, 11:53 pm

I like how Teddy's expresion gets increasingly more smug after each swipe Fitz's dad makes at him.

TheDemonDragonCat, April 19th, 2007, 2:12 am

Sexy teddy smirk!! Kick the old man's butt teddy!!!

Imola, April 19th, 2007, 6:10 am

It' s the attack of the dark backgrounds! Now if Teddy wore black too, there really were nothing else to be seen than two red glowing spots and the hisses. Great expressions, by the way. :) *roots for the mayor now*
Errr, by the way, when is it story-time again? I kind of like that more than action scenes... ^^()

Doodlebot, April 19th, 2007, 9:07 am

But he's going to die anyways.... isn't he?

kasi, April 23rd, 2007, 9:45 pm

Oooohhh... Ima dork!!

dang!! Teddy has some awesome skills right there!!

p.s. Old people have mad skills!!XD

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