pg 154 February 8th, 2007, 8:30 pm

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daidaishar, February 8th, 2007, 8:33 pm

poor Theo, he and Drake's mental settings don't realy match up well.

Yeah, I finaly added a scyth to the mob. It's all agricultural with the handle things, hurah! I think I will name scyth-guy Abraham.

re Wowfreak2011: oh, Drake is cetainly showing off. An now it's probably just because he enjoys it rather than trying to scaring them off.

re Croon: *makes new eyes for Drake*

re Mythee: Ok, things moving on a bit more hopefuly.

re Issoka: ^^ unfortunatly for Teddy, you called it, folks managed to get around Drake.

re HABE: ^^ thanks. I wanted to flesh out the crowd a bit so they aren't just a group of faceless punching bags.

re miao: yup, despite my many stalls XP

re kasi: um, I'm tyring a new way of drawing noses?

re TheDemonDragonCa: unfortunatly, Teddy seems to be a bit lacking in the badass department.

re teurastaa: well, my vamps aren't shedualed to show up for a while yet. Your bitchy one will probably have time to make her appearance before I get there XP

re Mr.Blackbird: aww, poor villagers

re bloomygirl315: but without saying it, the undisiplined villagers wouldn't hold their line without knowing why.

re tricorn5: no practice does realy work, when I compare my early pages to the new ones...yeah. It's hard to see at the time, but it does work. Keep at it ^^ (Bahamoot only works if you beleive you can ^^)

re sarall: years of drawing shadows on apples for years might have helped with the lighting. Night-time lighting makes things simpler so it comes out more dynamic.

re BatsAreFlyingRats: (eek, rating problems? umm, is it on this page too?) nah, the sword will only act up when it's changing shape.

re Angelzora: backgrounds! wheee! Drake is too fun to draw sometimes.

re bloomygirl315: aww, the dieing updates make me sad T_T what will poor Tei do?

re Jayge: or run...yeah. Teddy's sort of lacking in the agressive department. Kind of sad realy.

re Theflowerchild: I love the villagers, so they get a capital T. I'll try mixing up my camera angles a bit for future shots. They are getting a bit monotonous, aren't they?

re Assuni: ^^ thanks. The fight is coming soon, I promise (look, the scyth-guy is bracing for a swing)

re off-white: Yeah, Alucard had an impact on Drake...him and Algernon from the Importance of Being Ernest. How those two characters can combine is beyond me, but there it is.

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Croon, February 8th, 2007, 8:36 pm

Poor kiddo....
...but where's Joan?

teurastaa, February 8th, 2007, 8:39 pm

hehehe i hope so. she's my fave to draw. (she's my icon actually)
ooooooh sharp round things. Poor Theo XD he doesn't know how to fight...

daishar, February 8th, 2007, 8:50 pm

Come on, Theo! Improvise!

TheDemonDragonCat, February 8th, 2007, 8:54 pm

Teddy is not a badass like drake. That saddens me, I bet teddy would make a hott badass.

Butterscotch, February 8th, 2007, 8:57 pm

"Sir"! I love it!

darklightartist, February 8th, 2007, 9:43 pm

haha, I love how drake's so cassual about it all. Hey...where did Joan go?

off-white, February 8th, 2007, 10:49 pm

Ah, cool. Maybe you should dress up Drake as Alucard in the next filler page, for fun? I'd just like to see it :P

Imola, February 9th, 2007, 12:15 am

"I' m being nice..." Drake, get real! XD
Poor Teddy, scared STIFF!

Doodlebot, February 9th, 2007, 12:30 am

Yay, you here that Cassandra? No immense bodily harm for you! Better than the time you nearly got eaten by that guy possessed by an ant spirit!
Cassandra: *shudders* An AK-48 round to the head and it just kept knawing on my arm....

Theflowerchild, February 9th, 2007, 1:52 am

Yeah, mixing up camera angles is always a good move. And just a suggestion, if you wanted to make him look a bit more, I don't know, terrified? I'd put some bags under his eyes, and get rid of the hunch. People who I see that are scared never hunch, they always cower. I like the scythe though ^.^ Also, drake looks cool, and the back villager from panel one is looking pretty ominous. YOu do really well with facial expressions, but I noticed that the characters' body positions don't change a whole lot from shot to shot and from emotion to emotion, maybe make people more dynamic? OH well, last thing I have to say: if you haven't seen it yet, try out Supreme Commander:

It takes a little while to learn, but it's a great game.

Angelzora, February 9th, 2007, 2:05 am

^_^ Yay for brighter backgrounds! Aww...but you love Drake, don't you? <3 <3

And I agree with theflowerchild about the expressions on Teddy's face. He could look more scared. Perhaps you could put a "shock" thing in the background? (refer to page three of Tail Of A Mystery if you don't know what I mean! ^^).

Also, in the last panel, I reckon Teddy should look like he's reeling back a little. He doesn't look very scared... ><"

tricorn5, February 9th, 2007, 6:39 am

THEO! I SHALL DEFEND YOU! *runs in with a very large plaid-patterned sword* *whacks the guys attacking Theo with the blunt part of the sword* *tries and believes that she can draw bettrer* *draws a worm smiling* IT LOOKS TERRIBIBLE! *points at Drake suddenly* YOU ARE TO BLAME! *attacks Drake*

silversoul, February 9th, 2007, 6:57 am

XDD well can i help Teddy 8D

kasi, February 9th, 2007, 6:02 pm

oooh! poor Teddy! I'm cheering for you!!

*cheers loudly**blinks as everyone stares*

What? I think Teddy is kewl. *pouts*

luciferownsme, February 9th, 2007, 6:35 pm

Aww.... poor Teddy...

Nite Lewis, February 9th, 2007, 9:52 pm


I've been reading this since last night - It's great! I can't wait for more <3

bloomygirl315, February 9th, 2007, 11:54 pm

lol i love drakes "i'm so awesome" attitude XD

ok, so the telling of the plans couldnt be helped. owell. That just makes it that much easier on Drake =D

Mr.Blackbird, February 10th, 2007, 10:28 am

C'mon Drake you can fight them all cant you?

VampireKizu, February 10th, 2007, 9:32 pm

Ooooo Mr.Blackbird are you dissapointed in drake?

Yeah! lets see the Vmpire fight XDDDDD!!!!!!!

omniblade, February 10th, 2007, 10:33 pm

poor theodore. I know his pain, since I cant fight neither.

Mythee, February 11th, 2007, 1:57 pm

Aww Theo, and Drake because of the seal limiting his pwnzor powaas... now is the time for them to COMBINE, and become THEODRAKE500 THE DESTROYINATOR, and use their ULTRA SUPER GIANT DREAM FISH BEAM OF DOOOOOM! Ha! That'll teach those peasants.

...Or not, I guess. xD

BatsAreFlyingRats, February 11th, 2007, 2:08 pm

Its okay I was able to rate this. I really like the page. I hope teddy is okay.

BatsAreFlyingRats, February 11th, 2007, 2:08 pm

Its okay I was able to rate this. I really like the page. I hope teddy is okay.

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