pg 153 February 5th, 2007, 11:30 am

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daidaishar, February 5th, 2007, 11:42 am

I'm very happy with how the first two pannels came out, but not so happy with Drake in the last pannel, which is a pity since it's a much larger pannel. curse proportions and their wonky-ness.

Whatever opportunity The villagers had to back out is starting to disapear, why? Drake's starting to enjoy himself.


re teurastaa: is it bad that I enjoyed drawing the blood? hmm, can't choose between the vamps...may I use both? ^^

re Mythee: sorry, more stalling before the fight XP

re rakka981: well he can't loose too badly or the story will be over ^^

re Chaoskris88: he hears them but if the mayor hadn't explained, the villagers probably wouldn't have lisened. They're not soldiers, so they're not prone to blindly obeying orders.

re silversoul: I think Drake's got it under controll (or at least he seems to think so)

re XxIntegralEinxX: yes, but like Drake pointed out, they're untrained civilians, not soldiers. If they don't know why they should hold their ground, their chances of doing so are even smaller.

re TheDemonDragonCat: Drake certainly seems to think so.

re Taslin: I didn't want Fitz to be completly detestable, so I guess I'm playing a bit of a pity card with him. The mayor is an old military fellow, so I wanted that to start comming out. Unfortaunatly it's having the side effect of Drake identifying him as a "worthy" opponent.

re Theflowerchild: but backgrounds take so long T_T no worries, there will be backgrounds in the next one, and I imesnsly enjoyed drawing Fitz. Even thought it freaked out my roomates.

re Angelzora: Well, I wanted him to be speaking authoritativly, but I wasn't sure if I wanted him shouting. The bulk of the mob is just out of frame, and he's been sort of mellow up untill now.

re BatsAreFlyingRats: You're right about the mayor's hair. I guess now that I've started adding highlights to other people's hair, he'll have to get a few more grey strands

re No-Name9: ^^ thanks (Beau likes your avi btw XP)

re Doodlebot: I've managed to map out the fight fully now, and Cassandra's in the clear. Good news for her, unless she was planning on collecting health insurance ^^

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Croon, February 5th, 2007, 11:40 am

He's, like, GLOWY.

*steals his eyeballs*

Mythee, February 5th, 2007, 11:46 am

Omg third comment! x3 My luck is good to me once again!

NUUU STALLING xDD Actually I'm fine with it cause Drake looks so happy and happy is fun. xDD *lurves*

Issoka, February 5th, 2007, 12:01 pm

I think the backgrounds are fine really. I know what it's like with complicated backgrounds and such. I'm also lazy and take too many cues from manga.

On the other note Drake's definitly starting to have fun. I dare say the others will just have to sit back and watch unless someone manages to sneak through the underbrush and gets by Drake while he's playing.

HABE, February 5th, 2007, 12:20 pm

It's really a credit to your writing that these characters actually think about how they fight instead of rushing in to get picked off one at a time like they do in ... basically every movie. Such a nice change!

miao, February 5th, 2007, 2:48 pm

*steals the staff* mine! *runs off*
Is there a fighting sequence coming up? ^-^

kasi, February 5th, 2007, 3:26 pm

omg. drake is just getting really hot!!


TheDemonDragonCat, February 5th, 2007, 4:03 pm

I think so too, drake could so kick all they're asses easily, he's badass like that.

teurastaa, February 5th, 2007, 4:27 pm

hehe not at all I love drawing blood too XD and of course. you can use whichever characters. Theres a vampire bitchy lady but she doesn't come in for a while. I think I posted a sketch of her with lucus in AI somewhere XD
I really like drake in the last panel! it really does look like he's enjoying himself. heehee

Mr.Blackbird, February 5th, 2007, 4:58 pm

Kill em all. Let god sort em out

bloomygirl315, February 5th, 2007, 5:26 pm

stating his entire plan wasnt a very smart move on the old dude's part XD

ugh, the suspence is killer >.< lol

tricorn5, February 5th, 2007, 5:56 pm

I love your comic. And the last panel owns. I wish my drawing was that awesome. *prays to Bahamoot for better drawing skills* *doesn't get better drawing skillz* *stops believing in pheonixes because pheonixes are EVILE!* *throws a rock at Bahamoot for not getting better at drawing* Practice makes perfect my foot! All practice, and I NEVER get any better! *stops believing in clouds*

sarall, February 5th, 2007, 6:09 pm

I like the last panel. Especially the shift from fiery light to utter darkness on the grass and his clothes. I have a love of lighting, since I can't make it work for me. :}

BatsAreFlyingRats, February 5th, 2007, 10:47 pm

I Like this page, although I really wanted his sword to glow again, but I gues that takes energy he doesn't have, right?

P.S. For some reason my computer is not letting me rate this page, is that happening to anyone else?

Angelzora, February 6th, 2007, 1:48 am

(in regard to your last reply!)
Hmm...maybe it's because he's not like his son, Fitz! XD

I like this page but the backgrounds still seem a little dark to me (eh, maybe it's because I'm so fussy over settings and stuff).

Like the others said, the last panel has turned out quite nicely. Proportion isn't the easiest thing to do...

And so much focus on Drake! *ish tempted to draw fanart of him badass* >:3

bloomygirl315, February 6th, 2007, 10:21 am

*random post*

No new updates, but i have a news post if your at all interrested ^_^;

Jayge, February 6th, 2007, 8:37 pm

*twitch* why doesn't Teddy just speak up? And then feed... FEEEEEEED.

Theflowerchild, February 6th, 2007, 8:46 pm

Ooh! The ancient technique of the "Fighting Circle". Drake is my hero. And what's so specail about The villagers? Why do they get a 'T'? If you don't know what I mean, look at what you typed:

"Whatever opportunity The villagers had to back out is starting to disapear, why? Drake's starting to enjoy himself."

And I'd suggest that in that shot maybe try to do a shot from head hight downwards, the ones where the 'camera' is right above their head, or at least close, so their head is right up close, huge, and the rest of their body kind of shrinks away, or at least use that effect a little.

Oh, and if your roommates are afraid of Fitz like that, or you taking pleasure in it, you need new roommates. Best suggestion: Put them in a wood chipper, hey, it works in Fargo.

Assuni, February 6th, 2007, 9:05 pm

Woot! A fight scene!
And I like your last panel. You're better at proportions than I am. The lighting is pretty cool, too.

off-white, February 6th, 2007, 11:38 pm

"Let's play." He kind of reminds me of Alucard at the moment.

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